Wednesday, 7 March 2012

Trevor Belshaw on writing 'Tracy's Hotmail'

A big welcome to Trevor Belshaw, a long-time friend and contributor to The Pages, and a published writer who is going places.
Trevor, I have had the privilege of reading a lot of your writing, and it covers a wide aspect. I’m a big fan of your children’s stories, and have often marvelled at the way you write with such an authentic child’s voice, particularly when I read Peggy Larkin’s War and the Magic Molly stories.  You write short stories, too, and poems, many of which have found their way into The Pages.
Lately Crooked Cat Publishing has published Tracy’s Hotmail, a hilarious read, where again you write with such a convincing voice, anyone would think Trevor was a pseudonym for the real Tracy.
Could you tell us a little more about what inspired you, and the journey from that first idea to publication?
Over to you, Trevor.

Hi Marit. Thanks for the invitation and the lovely introduction.
Tracy’s Hot Mail started life as a nervous post to a writer's website, Writelink, in 2009. I was new to the craft back then and I was looking for feedback and guidance from the more seasoned authors on the website. The response to that first Tracy email was so good that I rushed out two more episodes which got similar feedback.
Flushed with this success I purchased a domain to spread the word about Tracy and in April 2009 www.tracyshotmail.com  website was born.
Over the next few months I posted new emails to the domain for Tracy's ever growing fan base. The site was eventually password protected so that long term supporters could read and comment on her latest adventures. After a year or so I found a natural break in the narrative and began work on the sequel, Tracy's Celebrity Hot Mail, which is a still a work in progress. I hope to finish it sometime this year. 
In 2010 Tracy was given her own Facebook page to keep her fans updated on her progress and it appeared that it was only a matter of time before she hit the bookshelves. https://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Tracys-Hot-Mail/138823129474884
Tracy almost ‘made it' on three separate occasions between 2010 and 2011 but something always managed to get in the way and the book remained unpublished. After the third aborted publication attempt I decided to give up on the project but some of Tracy's fans and a few of my close writer friends kept nagging  away at me to keep trying and in the end we all got the result we wanted when Crooked Cat Publishing offered to publish Tracy as an ebook.
In late 2011 Crooked Cat gave Tracy a facelift with a brand new cover, they set up a Tracy page on their own website. http://bit.ly/w1SEWS   and on January 20th Tracy was finally published.
But who is Tracy?
Tracy is every girl on the bus, every girl who has a boss, every girl who works in an office. She's the girl on the end of every lousy chat-up line. She’s the girl that older men fancy, the girl that has opinions on everything and everyone; even if those opinions are based solely on second or third hand information.
As I mentioned earlier I found Tracy on a bus one morning when my car was in for repair after a minor bump. I didn’t have a courtesy car so had to use public transport to get to work. On the Monday morning I sat behind two late-teen/early twenty-something girls who didn't waste time taking a breath for the entire bus ride.
They gossiped about bosses, boyfriends, rivals and workmates. They chatted about nightlife, drunkenness, mishaps and family. By the time they got off the bus I felt I knew their colleagues and close relatives intimately. Coming home I had the same experience, via two different girls.
The following day I was lucky enough to get the seat behind the same girls I had listened to the day before. This time the conversation was more of a hissed whisper, but it was still loud enough for me to be able to hear. Before we’d gone 200 yards I heard the first gasp of, ‘she didn’t?’ quickly followed by, ‘how could she? and in public too.’
I pricked up my ears and set my brain to auto record.
By midweek Tracy was born. I had taken the almost childlike innocence of one girl, the pure, vitriolic spite of another and the all-knowing worldliness of a third. I added the fashion tastes of one particular girl and the proneness to blonde moments from… well, a blonde actually. Seven girls contributed to the finished article in some way or other.  I would like to thank them all personally as they gave me the tools to build the ultimate gossip machine that is Tracy.
The people they spoke about and the situations they discussed didn’t make it into Tracy's world. The majority of it was far too mundane. I did amalgamate two of the most talked about managers to make Mr Blunt. It seems all offices have a character like him. Olivia came from my own head but Tracy's continual description of her as, 'the tart,' came straight from the back of the bus. It was a term used more regularly than any other.
Tracy’s Hot Mail can be bought for the kindle platform http://amzn.to/z7ctWe  and for all other e-readers via the Smashwords website. http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/123781
Tracy’s Hot Mail is also available from Barnes & Noble and ITunes.

Thank you, Trevor, for showing us how people-watching – and listening – can be put to excellent use as a research tool. It sounds as though writing Tracy’s Hotmail was fun from beginning to end, and you have certainly provided the reader with a lot of laughs. Tracy has taken on a true identity, and I’m looking forward to visiting Tracy’s world again.
Tracy’s Hotmail is an excellent read, and if you haven’t got a Kindle, you can download Kindle for PC, to read e-books on your computer/laptop. 

Saturday, 21 January 2012

On Writing for Children, by Rebecca Emin


With the official launch of Rebecca’s excellent book New Beginnings just two days away, Rebecca has kindly agreed to be our guest blogger today, sharing her journey to becoming a published children’s author.
Over to you, Rebecca.
Writing For Children

 The fact that my debut novel is for children came as a surprise to me. I had been planning to write a story for adults, but when I opened up the document for the first time, the idea for New Beginnings came to me so I started writing it out.

It was only when my beta readers read the manuscript and said they enjoyed it, and one of them made a comment about she had no idea how I could write for that age group as she wouldn’t have thought to put in various details, that I realised I had made the right decision. I find it really easy to get my head back to how I felt when I was that age, and also keep in my head the things my teenage step daughter and my nine year old daughter have spoken to me about, which really helps.

The thing that I love most about writing for children the most is the responses from the readers. The children who have read my book have been so positive and the fact that they keep asking when the next book will be out is so encouraging. I have already heard of a couple of schools where the book has been read to children and of one school girl who showcased New Beginnings in a project she was asked to make about any book she loved. 

I have already finished a second novel for the same age group, and I am planning to write a short story collection this year. I’ve asked some of my younger readers what they think of short stories and the responses were varied and interesting but overall they seemed to like the idea.

I have written a couple of very short children’s stories for Shambelurkling and Other Stories, and I when I took it with me on my first school visit, and said I was going to read one of the stories out, one of the girls said “yes” really loudly. It was an unplanned, honest reaction but she had a huge impact on me. It made me think perhaps I am on the right track.

I hope to write more novels for children in future, and I hope that everyone enjoys New Beginnings.

Thank you for inviting me here to talk about writing for children.


You'll find links to purchase New Beginnings  on Rebecca's blog, as well as on this blog, in the side bar.

Thank you very much for being our guest blogger today, Rebecca, and allowing us an insight into your writing life, especially when it comes to children's books. We're looking forward to the next one!

Tuesday, 10 January 2012

A Knowing Look by Rebecca Emin

I’m trying to remember when I first got to know Rebecca Emin, and I think it was when she submitted a short story to our anthology Shambelurkling and Other Stories. Since then Rebecca has gone from strength to strength and has had her work published in several places. Her debut novel New Beginnings will be officially launched on January 23rd, although I believe that it is already enjoying some considerable success! We’ll join her in spreading the word. To be part of the blogsplash, go to
     This, however, is about Rebecca’s second book, her collection of short stories (four of them previously published elsewhere), entitled A Knowing Look and Other Stories. Here we have a varied collection, from the poignant first story A Knowing Look - a beautiful, but heart wrenching story set in Africa - through a little sci-fi in A Step Too Far, then touching on love and loss, separation and a new beginning in As Fast as You Can.  Not giving too much away, further stories touch on a little lightly spiced revenge(could be deadly!), a birds’ eye view of the Human, and his artificial dwellings encroaching on their natural habitat, as well as stories touching on the  human condition in all its hues, including my favourite On the Corner of Clerk Street.
An excellent collection of short stories and flash fiction, varied in content and eloquently written – and leaving the reader wanting more.
A Knowing Look is available from Smashwords:   http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/108218
The wonderful cover is by Paul Townend, who also designed the cover for Shambelurkling and Other Stories.

Wednesday, 21 December 2011

The Pages on Hold and Annual Competition Cancelled

I have decided to take the step to put The Pages on hold, as my computer keeps crashing, and I can't safeguard work by contributors at the moment. I hope to get a new system, or the old repaired, some time in the new year.
The decision to cancel the annual competition has two reasons: the same as above, and the fact that with 10 days to go to the original dead-line, we haven't had a single entry. Sorry folks! Could I suggest that you enter more established competitons, such as Flash 500 ( www.flash500.com) instead?

Monday, 14 November 2011

A Banquet for Elvira-Joy, by Linda M Price

The author of the children’s story A Banquet for Elvira-Joy, Linda Price, and I go back a long way, to the days when I illustrated what she wrote, and kept most of my writing for my bedside drawer. Elvira-Joy’s story – or rather, that of Pa’s story as he tries to please the little troll – originated back in those days, too – when Linda first came across a real-live Norwegian troll. Well, is it a coincidence that she calls me Ma, and Ma-Troll appears in the story? Hmmm…
With just three days to go to the banquet celebrating Elvira-Joy’s third birthday, Pa asks her what she would really, really like for the banquet.
‘…Tell me, what is it you want? Whatever you like!’ Pa could hardly wait for her answer.
Elvira-Joy’s mouth opened wider.
‘Pa?’
‘Yes, my little ferret?’
‘A billy-goat.’ Elvira-Joy smiled.
‘A billy-goat?’ shrieked Pa… ‘for the banquet?’ He swallowed hard. ‘Oh no, you can’t… You’ll have sausage rolls, and gingerbread boys…’
Elvira-Joy’s bottom lip trembled. ‘But…’
‘And a cake,’ shouted Pa, ‘with three big candles on it.’
Big tears welled in Elvira-Joy’s huge yellow eyes.
‘Now don’t cry, Elvi. Pa will make his little wood-pigeon a bread and butter pudding, with brown sugar on top, and currants in the middle…’

Not wanting to upset his little wood pigeon, Pa wracks his brain to work out what a billy-goat looks like, and ends up retracing the steps of his Grandpappy, to the rickety bridge over Fishy River – where he hopes to find out…
I’m not giving anything else away – except – it wasn’t the billy-goats Gruff he encountered, oh no…
‘Troll?’ screeched Mrs Grump. ‘Ain’t never no such thing – take that!’ She banged her walking stick down hard on Pa’s head. ‘And that and that and that! I didn’t believe in you when I was a little girl and I don’t believe in you now!’
This is a wonderful read-aloud story for children of all ages – I even read some of it out for my other half.  At just £2.99, it will make a great stocking filler.
30% of the profit from A Banquet For Elvira-Joy will be donated to Compassion In World Farming (CIWF), a charity close to Linda’s heart.


You'll find the link to Lulu, where the book is for sale in my store front, through clicking on the image in the sidebar.

Thursday, 6 October 2011

The Pages Autumn Issue, number 12, Out Now!

http://issuu.com/stinajj/docs/the_pages_12     The link for the virtual issue on Issuu.


    The Pages
                           Issue 12                Autumn 2011

                           Brought to you by The Apprentice Writer
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Monday, 26 September 2011

A Leap of Faith, by Richard Hardie: the book

A Leap of Faith: First in the series of The Temporal Detective Agency.

Well, I sung the praises of the wonderful cover for Richard Hardie's book, and now it's the turn for the book itself. I don't want to give too much away, because I'm writing a review for the next issue of The Pages. The e-book is now on 'the bookshelf' in the sidebar, and available in different e-reader versions.

Should you have friends or family on or near The Gower, in South Wales, this first book in the series is set there - and what a story! Let them know!

   The way  Richard has interwoven history, and imaginary history, too, with present day, with a proper location (Port Eynon comes to mind), wizardry et al - and still being able to keep the voice of the narrator and her friends true to their age (as in the present, not way back in time, in Camelot - from whence they came), is very clever. The storyline is excellent. It played out in my mind's eye as though watching the story on the screen. Tertia (who tells the story) and Unita are great girls, and I think any young reader - and older ones for that matter - like me - will be looking forward to the next in the series.
   Time travelling apprentices to Marlene - (Merlin himself being back in Camelot) - Tertia and Unita find themselves in the middle of great adventures - and mysteries to be solved, as part of The Temporal Detective Agency.

My granddaughter (9) tells me that she really wants a Kindle, or an e-reader. I tried to point out that they are a bit expensive for a girl her age, but she told me lots of her friends have them, because like her, they like to read. I told her that I would get her a copy of A Leap of Faith when it's out in paperback.

Watch this space. You haven't heard the last of Tertia and Unita (I'll reveal a little more in the forthcoming review.)